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elingregoryI'm stuck and have rewritten the same paragraph in my Greek story six times now. I know exactly what I want to say but can't find a graceful way of saying it. On the other hand the story is growing again. I've taken the advice of ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
charliecochrane to make it longer (and I'm giving it more oomph while trying to keep the angst levels realistic - melodrama can be fun in the right context but it's wrong for some characters) and that of erastes to track down and burn those pesky filler words and cut way back on the "that"s.
I'm constantly astonished at how kind and supportive this bit of the m/m writing community is. Thanks, guys. It means a lot.
charliecochrane to make it longer (and I'm giving it more oomph while trying to keep the angst levels realistic - melodrama can be fun in the right context but it's wrong for some characters) and erastes to track down and burn those pesky filler words and cut way back on the "that"s. I'm constantly astonished at how kind and supportive this bit of the m/m writing community is. Thanks, guys. It means a lot.
